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She could already hear their voices in her subconscience as her wings began to flame and fall back up to heaven - "well...was it worth it?"

With tears in her eyes, she let herself feel everything she'd felt for the past few years. Everyone warned her not to get too close to her assignment, but she never thought anything would come of caring and loving him. The first year as his guardian angel went by smoothly, as she helped him grow as a person. The next even smoother. She found herself looking forward to each day with him more and more. He had the most adorable smile, and contageous laughter. Most of all though...he was just a good person - honest and real.

She couldn't remember the exact moment when things changed...but she remembered the bitter sensation of jealousy stinging her heart as she watched him flirt and kiss other girls. Over the next two years, they fell in love, as she showed herself to him. They became best friends, and more. The friendship turned to romance. The romance turned to passion. Passion turned to lust, and lust to sin.

Their relationship became too intense...but she didn't give a fuck. It felt so fucking good. She wasn't allowed to touch him, but oh did they have some intense nights. She loved talking about the sexual "what if's..." with him. She loved masterbating in front of him too, while he jacked off. She was his angelslut...and fucking loved it.

She knew the consequences of breaking the rules and touching him, but after years of plucking feathers in frustration of cumming alone...she finally broke. It was the lust that brought her to the edge...but love is what pushed her over (or was it the other way around?) That first kiss was something God himself couldn't compare to. The rest of the night was just as perfect. She practically exploded as his fingers slipped inside of her for the first time. They had every sort of sex imaginable - slow, fast, soft, hard, loud, quiet, oral, anal...everything. One night to last forever.

So now...crying in pain as her wings began to cinder from sin, and hearing the demons come for her...her answer to the voices was...

"Yes..."


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Okay...I wanted to do a lot more to this, to relate to the story, but I'm going to start designing CD covers for some local bands, and need to just get in the swing of designing more for real life and less for DA. I know it's not my usual standards! Ugh!!! :P (Lick)


This is a gorgeous stock photo from , and it sucks I don't have the time to do more with it - maybe in the future. :P (Lick)


Feather brush from :relique.net: (thanks for the help!)

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Music listened to while designing: Magnitude9, Zerohour, In Flames, To/Die/For
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great prose and pic. i love the wings! they look like fire, and so does her skin! this would be a great album cover or just a pic.

bethany :) (Smile)

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"Now I'm walking again to the beat of a drum
And I'm counting the steps to the door of your heart."

- Crowded House
i agree - the wings are amazing

the prose itself was.. intense - an interesting concept - i loved the line "one night to last forever" (ah, a romantic through it all)




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time wastes so much time
i love it! Sad Angel

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i wish i was invisiable,
so i could see everyone else,
and no one could see me...

I'm sorry I can't go any further with you
And tonight may be a night I'll regret.
But I'm already somebody's lover,
He just hasn't found me yet. :lonely:
Woah! That's a nice one! First the wings look amazing, I like their glow.
Especially that small feather up there, it's such a nice touch! Sorrow and self doubt are the words that come to my mind while watching this piece.
Next, the girls pose is great and the lights I don't know how much of a lights did you add to it yourself, but it's perfect. Eventho I'm more into male angels...hehe, angels are males you know, I like the girl. I think I saw her already in some other submission not so long time ago.

The prose; my favorite line is certainly this one " Passion turned to lust, and lust to sin. "
Passion, lust, sin..all my favorite words in one sentence..aww, seems i'm not a romantic type as strwberryfire here.Giggle
You know that song with the lyrics "...you want the sin without a sinner".? yum

Batty
awesome wings!!! flaming wings that's cool... great idea and a great story thing to go with it... top notch my friend, top notch

J

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I write well, so READ MY SHIT!!!
~jet8402
very nice and great visual concept Clap
this fits well for a CD cover, i'll see it for a progressive band ;) (Wink)

i love the fire effect (ya know i'm a pyromaniac) and the atmosphere Thumbs Up
the typo is simple but well placed, good job on this Bro :D (Big Grin) #1

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Bros and true friends :peace:
!oceanborn~melwilemon
~lia-chan~saint-kro~arioth~ maggotlore
~daemonium~duskblue
wowzers! intense indeedy! *sweating* well sweet dreams tonite I AM HORNY!!! :D (Big Grin) damn .. im so speechless, the cover would look beautiful, and the wings are depicted with such a modern concept! Worship yish, a few things came alright... i mean up that is.. i mean...

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art > =manya

photography > ~motiv

part of > ~da-stock
love the burning wings,looks realistic

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"See Everything" ...................Camouflage Samurai
Good colour contrast in this one. I like it how she blends into the black background. And I just must second everyone else about those wings, they look really beautiful.

Good job!

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she caught the flies, poor little things
and then tore off their tiny wings
she kill'd the birds, and broke the chairs
and threw the kitten down the stairs
nice one :D (Big Grin)

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